Rapcloudstrife

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I Miss You
I put two versions in one track all together. Each version ave the same tempo, chord and song progressions, and lyrics to it (there is no vocals yet recorded). Despite the similarities, each of them sound and feel different. So I'm kinda having a debate on which one I should continue one. Each version start with an intro, verse, prechorus and end on chorus on the track.

v1
sound like dance music, very electronic
would be hard to perform live
a lot of work put in to it than v2
done everything on FL Studio

v2
sound like pop, rock, grunge
would be easier to play live with only 4 instruments guitar, bass, drums, and inclluding the vocals
i just started and  finished recording this yesterday
live guitars were used in the song

Tell me what you like better....

Hey guys I'm pretty new here... so to start off. I'm gonna put down one of my recent songs I've currently working on. The lyrics is pretty much done, but needs touch up i think.
The paragraph follows as Chorus, vers1, vers2, vers3, bridge1, bridge 2.

Stare
I can't help it but stare
but to look at you and dream about you
being at your side, would make me smile
I swear I'll never let go of
someone so beautiful
 
You have beatiful eyes
like ones, I never seen before
so blue, so nice
like the heaven and skies

You have a super sweet smile
it strikes me in my heart
in my dark, it makes it right
so I'm glad, you're at my sight

You have attractive hair
elegant in every single way
so clean and perfect
similar to a golden flower

You have beautiful eyes
You have a super sweet smile
You have attractive hair
You are so hot...

You're as pretty as you are
From the bottom to the top
From inside out
From who you are
From who you are
You are beautiful...

I'm thinking of changing the 3rd verse. Into something different. It gets kinda old with "you have...." Well, I did the third verse really quickly I guess but yea.
Please comment. I would appreciate it.
thanks

It's Andrew, my friend and I... we both wrote this song.
Andrew = acoustic gtr
Me, Rap = elec. gtr.
Both guitars and vocals were both recorded on Sonar with added effects and the drums was done on FL Studio and transferred to Sonar to finish it.
A christian song. We tried bringing this song to the youth band i used to play but never had the chance to practice and they didnt want it lol. So its just we that perform this song.
Its kinda messy but w.e... we had some previous recordings but this one is way better. It was just finished this year.
ENJOY!!!!!

Hi! I'm very new here and intent to get better with my music.
For a start I'm going to post this music I made... please comment on it.

how to i upload music in here?